Is there more to this story? It seems like there should be since the wand mystery remains unsolved, yet I'm surprised to have a non-cliff-hanger ending to a chapter. That doesn't happen very often!

 In any case, I really enjoyed reading this story. I just love reading about Harry as a father. Oddly enough, this is one of few which has his child as an infant -- I seem to mostly find him fathering children who are already at least three years old by the time the story begins. You've written him as a very believeable father, no matter how young he is. I liked the brief pang of regret a chapters back when Ron was excited about his new place and Harry remembers what he gave up. Poor, noble Harry. But I somehow don't think he'd give up all that he has now.

 You've written a wonderfully canonocial relationship between Harry and Ginny, no matter how much it deviates from the plots of the books. You managed to capture Ginny's fire and true personality before we'd ever seen it in the books and maintain it throughout three stories. I hope she'll be able to make it through her studies okay -- and doesn't kill Harry when she finds out what he's really been hiding from her!

I'm very intrguied by the wand cores and can't wait to find out more about that! Just who is Ollivander working for and why? What are those miserable Death Eaters up to now? Can't wait to find out the answers to my questions! 

 Oh yeah, I also wanted to be sure to mention how much I was laughing at drunk Ron and Harry a couple of chapters ago. I particularly liked Ron's declaration of being sober and Harry wondering what on earth happened to the neighbor's hedges. Hee, hee.