Good, really good. Nicely stuck to canon, few questions, I take it this is based round the time that Harry finished school, seeing as last year he was there with Ginny? It was a nice little story, but I would have loved to see more details, but I suppose that makes it in to a novel really doesn't it? And atleast he is with her in the end, just happens to be death that gets finally allows him some peace. Although, I have a terrible feeling this is how JKR has it all layed out, which will suck! But you can't just say "and they all lived happily ever after, not with Harry Potter! So well done, and try to write something longer! I would gladly read anything you write, as you have impressed with what you have done so far. Cheers Frag