I'm mad at Ron for saying that about his best friend....so what if it puts her in danger.,..he and Hermione are in just as much danger too.
you're still doing a fantabulous job. I'm sitting here holding my breath cause I HAVE to know what happens next!
YOU're just too good at this. I'm serious.
You're doing a fabulous job. I'm about to read the next chapter. You so derserved a lot more of reviews.
lol! That last comment by Ron made me laugh. You're still doing a great job. I can't wait to read the rest of this.
Phenomenal first chapter. I'm very impressed by the quality of the writing. You said this was your first story...so I'm just kind of surprised at how well you write.
Great chapter! I love the idea about the charms, but there are a few grammar and punctuation errors.
my quesion is in your world how storng is the conection between Harry and Moldy shorts, and does the conection trasfer to Ginny now?
Author's Response: Like I said to your earlier review, this was written post-GoF in March 2001. It's in canon with that time period, but not later.
Hay, where is the KISS!!!
You have their ages wrong. it would be no problem if it were not for the fact that, if Ginny was only 3months younger then Harry she would be in the same year. Harry was born July 31, 1980. Ron Was born March 1, 1980. Ginny was born Aug 11, 1980.
Author's Response: This was written in early 2001, long before JKR's chats where she established Ginny and Ron's birthdays. It's easy to 'correct' me now and tell me I've made a mistake, but none of us knew back then.
In addition, if you knew the UK school system, you'd know a child born in July 1980, is in the year above a child born in October 1980 - the cut off is 31st August for admission to a school year.
Wow what a wonderful idea, I really like that charm. It is not to often we ff writiers hit a truly inspired idea. I think I have one of me own but it's not as impactful to the story. Great chapter, now to see Ginny put Ron in his place.
I would be raving about this chapter, but I think you skipped the tenson build up before Hermione's break down. I was left asking "What the hell?"
Another good chapter, but they seem to read a little fast. I am guess your chatpers about 1100 words or so. Not a bad chapter length but longer chapters would make the story better.
I like the was you write, lots of detail with out to many words. I would like to point out that you may have forgtten about Prefects. Ther is no way Hermione was not going to get her badge. If you go back and revise you might want to drop that in.
Nice start, took me awhile to place where cannon ended and you begain. You might want to think about give new readers a heads up.
Author's Response: True. This was written way back in early 2001, so it's post-GoF, and significantly pre-OotP. It could probably do with a note of sorts on it these days.
That wasn't very supportive of Ron to say at the end about his best mate. Great chapter.
damn...its stories like this that make me wonder what my humble pen is doing in the world of harry potter fanfiction...bloody brilliant! i love ginny's sock fetish...
I read this, along with Alpha and Omega, for the first time... longer ago than I can remember. I still love it... it gives me my romance fix. I'm finishing the series, and I can't stop reading.
Oh my godddd! I read this story years ago, back on GT! This is the first time I'm rereading it in a very long time. I cant wait to finish and go on to Alpha and Omega! You've always been one of my favorite fanfiction authors! Just thought I'd share that =P
I know it's a while ago you wrote this, and a lot of water has flowed under the fanfic bridge, but even so...
This remains to this day my all time favourite fanfic chapter.
Am I just a sad old romantic at heart?