great start, and thanks for not using the word "anyways." It bugs me to death!
Oh, wow. This was an AWESOME fanfic!!! I luffed it!!! You're a great fanfic writer!
~Morgs & Liv
i ferst read ur fanfic about a year ago and i loved them then and i still love them now!! ihave bin waiting for u to finish "home is where the hart is" for so long and i cant wait ne longer...so iam going now to read it:) plez carry on writing such good storys
i ferst read ur fanfic about a year ago and i loved them then and i still love them now!! ihave bin waiting for u to finish "home is where the hart is" for so long and i cant wait ne longer...so iam going now to read it:) plez carry on writing such good storys
great story!!! hahaha
Ah, that was just as good the third time around as it was the first time I read it. I always love to read this story when I'm in a bad mood or things aren't going well. It's like a lovely dream and when I wake from it, there is an irrepressible grin on my face (rather than Harry's). Must be magic or something...
Gotta love Fred and George with their sock spell. Too precious.
One thing stands out as I continue to read your story: your style of writing. It is marvelous. Words and phrases effortlessly and intricately blend in a delightful, almost lyrical style. I also love the way you effortlessly interweave the different plot elements. Of course, I'm sure it only looks effortless. ;-)
I love how you've brought all the chess pieces to life and added so much more detail to this singular aspect of JKR's universe. It is charming. Then you added Harry and Ginny to it. Simply amazing. I also like how Ginny challenges Harry to the chess game and displays her mischievous side. Too funny and a beautiful way to develop her character. This is the third time I've read Carpe Diem and I must say that this story has a magic all of its own. It is very precious. Thanks for sharing.
That was a great story. You are a very talented writer. I pretty much read the whole thing without stoping. Sorry I didn't leave more reviews, but I couldn't slow down long enough. Great job!
Ahh..that was a great fic! I think I started it on another site(who knows which one), but I'm glad I found it again. Thanks for the entertainment! j I'm off to read the rest of them.....
A nice bit of work! You have a nice way of bringing out the often unseen side of the caracters. The only thing I have to critisize is the lack of background information...It is like trying to know what is going on in a book when you skipped the first five chapters.
The story is comming along nicely. Great job on showing the tensions and emotions so far. My one question is: What happened to Snape?